It's from many years ago...not even sure when this was done...
It was time
I never dreamed...it would be so easy, to finally walk on out the door...but I'm tired of tryin' to make you smile...and livin' everyday on trial...and tired of always bein' the one---who loved a little more.
It was time...
When you really get down to the bottom line, we never had the poetry...we just tried to make it rhyme...
It was time...
that we were over...it was time.
and now I know the emptiness I'm feelin' --- is more for what we missed than what we had...
But watchin' somethin' dyin' slow...
can hurt much more than lettin' go...and even whith the loneliness you know...
I'm almost glad...
Guess I wasn't right for you, and you weren't right for me...
and it doesn't pay to sell your soul...
just for company...
It's better bein' lonely....
It was time.
10 comments:
Wow... I love this..... and I know what a typewriter is.... only because my grand dad had one at his house LMAO ;)
THIS IS NICE, U NEVER DISSAPPOINT...
Hahaha D! Sad thing is I probably am old enough to be your grand dad! oh let's hope not!
Thanks GateKeeper!!
yessss! *snaps* i remember i did that in hs trying to make everything rhyme! lol. cool poem though.
I love it!
D-Place: Oh I can't believe that @ all LMAO... I'm 27, but I won't ask how old u are in public LoL. ;)
i really dont think man wasnt made to live lonely. so i do agree with the overall tone of this post and i was all in that sucka!
wow, I need to use this pic for my blog...hmmm, gaytekeeper may get jealous.....I always steal his pics...i think you got a good pic here too. Check me out in about a week
Gems are often stashed in places we rarely look. This was one of those rare gems, disguised as an emotional.
One.
These words are a gem indeed. D, you need to be published. Seriously! There are volumes of gay poetry which come out, submit your work. You have everything to gain.
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